[Fan Fiction] In the Circle Cocytus

Jane 03-24-2004 12:50 AM
This is a continuation of "Roger the Damned", "Black Forest", and "Oh Ye Mortals!"

Oh, and, the prettiest paragraph in the story belongs to Zola and her masterful command of the written word. I'm in your debt dudette.


In the Circle Cocytus

Dorothy stood in front of the abandoned Wayneright mansion. It hardly resembled the building she remembered. Strange vines curled their way around the walls, and weird, twisted trees bowed down, hiding it from view. The windows of the place were broken and there was a gaping hole in the wall where Beck’s robot had torn its way through. Big O had told her that this was the place the machine had come from, and she wasn’t surprised. Too many strange and mysterious things had already emerged from it, and in some way they were all related to her.

She took a step inside the rusted gate. It was an empty shell now, having been stripped of all that had made it significant. Yet, there was something buried beneath it that was deeper than her memories—something more archetypal that refused to be erased or forgotten.

She pushed in the rotted door easily and stepped inside the crumbling relic. Nothing there was familiar to her, although she knew it should be. The few objects the room contained were barely recognizable. To see the place so derelict made Dorothy feel like a part of her had disappeared.

She continued to walk further into the house, unsure of what she was looking for, when a noise behind her made her turn around. There was someone standing behind her, outlined by the light of the open door. The gears in Dorothy’s eyes fluctuated her irises in an attempt to focus on the figure, but she couldn’t get a clear picture until the woman stepped into the room.

She was a short, mousy-looking person with wild, intoxicating brown curls. Dorothy immediately sensed what she was.

“You know,” the woman said, strolling casually towards her, “There is an old fairy tale about something called a mermaid, a being without a soul, who fell in love with a mortal man.” She paused for a moment, picking up a piece of wood that might have once been part of a chair leg, and shredded it between her fingers. “This mermaid paid a terrible price so that she could appear human, win the love of the man, and gain an immortal spirit, but in the end he fell in love with another of his kind, and she disintegrated into nothing more than foam. Somehow I think that little tale applies to your situation, Miss Wayneright. Surely you can see the similarities?”

“You are a thing of half-truths,” Dorothy said, “And yet you are an android like me. How can this be?”

The other smirked, but answered only with another question, “Just what are you looking for here? This place no longer has any part of you. Besides, you probably shouldn’t leave your man alone at such a critical time. Who knows what might happen?”

Dorothy didn’t like the way the woman smiled; it was full of nastiness and a strange undercurrent of forbidden knowledge—knowledge to be dispensed only in misleading fragments and cryptic clues. And as for any allusions to Roger being in danger, Dorothy was not concerned, he and Big O were perfectly capable of taking care of themselves.

“Of course,” the woman said, “Your situation isn’t looking particularly good either.”

Abruptly, a herd of giant, pink robots, identical to those that Beck had used to capture her before, swarmed in through the open door. Last time they had taken her without a struggle, but now Dorothy had a newfound sense of identity and with it, the desire for self-preservation. As the first robot came towards her, snapping its lethal tail, she pushed off from the floor and jumped on it hard, squashing it into the floor. Another robot reached for her, and she grabbed its mechanical arms and snapped them out of their sockets. She let one clatter to the floor, but held onto the other, swinging it at the approaching foes like a baseball bat.

She slammed her weapon into the body of one of the attackers, causing a satisfying eruption of electrical sparks. Before she could go after the next, a shot rang out. Her arm fell limply to her side, a stream of oil pouring to the ground beside her. The gun was fired twice more and she collapsed as gaping holes appeared in her legs. She looked up and saw that the android was poised to shoot again, and that the remaining robots were swarming over her.

***

Roger Smith didn’t know what to do. He stood in Dorothy’s bedroom, staring blankly at the emptiness. She was gone, and he had no idea where she was. All he knew was that Beck must have been behind it, just as he had been every other time. Roger felt lost and alone; his mind overwhelmed with thoughts of f the terrible things that might have happened. He didn’t know what he would do if he never found her. He had never even told her that he…

Overwhelmed, he sat down on the floor, his head in his hands. His eyes burned and there was a lump in his throat that made him feel like he was choking. He had never even told her that he… that he… A drop of water ran from the corner of his eye, quickly followed by another, then another. He fought to control the rising tide of grief and despair but it would not be denied.

When his tears had slowed he wondered what Dorothy would think if she came in and saw him laying on the floor like this. When she had found him underground, consumed with irrational fear, she had taken his head into her lap and stroked his hair, her touch so gentle and comforting that he had dreamed of his mother. If she were here now, would she do the same? The memory of it soothed him and he closed his eyes. “I love you, Dorothy,” he whispered. Within moments he was sleeping.

His dream was all too familiar. There was the terrible sky filled with warring megadeuses where he was one of the many that were piloting them. His felt cold and empty in comparison to Big O even though it seemed to be an exact copy. He also saw the old visions of fire and the destruction of the world, but now there was a building rising out of the flames that looked astonishingly like the central tower of Paradigm. He saw himself wearing the clothes of a tired vagabond as he stepped inside the tower. There was a flash of blinding light and he felt the sensation of unmatchable joy as he was…released, that was the best way he could describe it. He saw Angel and he knew, although he couldn’t say how, that she was in terrible trouble. He woke to the sound of her calling his name.

“…Roger, Master Roger,” said Norman, “Are you all right sir?”

The butler was sitting next to him on the floor, a look of terrified concern on his face. Roger managed a weak smile to comfort his friend. “I think I’ll live,” he said, “but Dorothy is gone.”

“She is?” Norman said, “I never saw her leave, and no one has entered the building since you left.”

Roger sat up and rubbed his forehead, feeling the first twinges of a headache, “Dorothy is gone and I had a dream about Angel,” he said.

“I’m sure Miss Dorothy is all right sir,” the other man said comfortingly.

“There’s somewhere I have to go,” Roger said, standing up, “Is the Griffon ready?”

“I’ll go check, sir,” Norman said, “Are you sure you’re all right?”

“No, I’m not sure,” Roger, answered. “But who is?”

The butler smiled and left. Roger changed out of his dirty, wrinkled suit, washed his face, and slicked back his hair. By the time he went down the stairs, the Griffon was ready to go. He tried to shake off the strange sense of foreboding that was clouding his senses, but it was if a gloomy fog had settled over him. Perhaps it was the nightmare that had done it, but whatever the reason, he was grim as he drove the car out of the garage and steered it in the direction of the abandoned Paradigm Tower.
Jane 03-24-2004 12:57 AM
***

Ryon Cummings had been terrified during the interview with the military police. He was deathly afraid that they might open the janitor’s closet, find the case, and take it, or, worse yet, that they might stop him from doing the very same thing later on. But no one seemed to doubt him when he carried the thing out casually like a briefcase.

Perhaps he had fooled them with his casual manner, perhaps the military police were sloppy, or maybe he had just gotten lucky. In any event, he now had all of the pieces in his possession, and if his luck held, the blame for their loss would fall on the thief. He double-checked to make sure that no one had followed him, and then he climbed down into the depths of the city where he had stored the rest of the loot.

Once underground, he flipped on his flashlight, immediately dropping it when he saw what the light illuminated. His hands shook as he tried to pick it back up. He finally succeeded and held it up once more. He hasn’t been mistaken—he was looking at a megadeus.

The machine was magnificent, and Ryon walked towards it with reverence. The only thing the great Deus lacked was a foot, and he had the pieces. He walked worshipfully towards the place where the appendage had been disconnected. It would not take much to reconnect it and he knew exactly how it could be done.

Ryon quickly set down his case and took out his tools: crude screwdrivers and ratchets, but they would have to do. He also realized that the megadeus might need a good supply of oil and perhaps a jolt of electricity before it could get going, but all that could be dealt with in time. For now, he would simply focus on putting the thing back together.

He was working on attaching bits of the iron skeleton, when he heard a noise behind him. Startled, he looked up from his work, and saw a man standing among the robotic pieces, staring at him.

“So you’re the one Big Duo was waiting for,” the man said. “You’re his mechanic.”

Ryon put down his tools and wiped his greasy hands on a rag. “Who are you?” he asked.

“I’m sorry,” the man moved towards Ryon and shook his hand, “My name is Michael Seebach.”

“Schwarzwald,” Ryon said. He was unsure of where the strange name came from, or why he felt compelled to say it.

Seebach looked at him cryptically, “Schwarzwald?” he said, as if the name brought to mind a forgotten riddle. He walked towards Big Duo and ran a hand along its side and whispered softly, “Träger der Götter, zeigen mir die Wahrheit.” He seemed surprised by his own words.

“You aren’t going to make me wrap him up in bandages?” Ryon asked suspiciously.

Neither man was exactly sure why, but it seemed to be an extremely funny comment to make, and both of them began to laugh. When the laughter was exhausted, Seebach picked up one of Ryon’s tools, handed it to him, and the work began in earnest.

***

Dorothy was being carried between the claws of one of the scorpion-robots. With one of her arms disabled, she could not get the proper leverage to snap through its abominable pincers. Her legs dangled uselessly below the machine’s claws. She might have had the strength for one good kick, but it would be of little value and she preferred to save her energy until its expenditure would do her some real good. Her mind, at least, was operating well enough, and she intended to apply it.

For the moment, she concentrated on observing the android that was walking next to her moving prison. Dorothy could usually feel some kind of connection between herself and other kinds of machines, but with this one there was nothing, only a deep and penetrating void. She felt a need to fill the vacuum.

“What is your name?” she asked.

“Lisa.” The android offered no further information.

“You are well made,” Dorothy observed, “Were you made to resemble someone?” When Lisa didn’t answer, she continued to think out loud. “You were not made by Soldano or Wayneright, although you could have been. Why were you made?”

Lisa stopped suddenly. As she did, the robot that was carrying Dorothy stopped also, jerking her between its claws. She stood for a moment with her head down, a look of hot anger on her face.

“All of the androids in this city,” she said, “Where do the memories for their assembly come from? Even your precious Wayneright and Soldano, where do you think they learned how to construct you?”

She turned towards Dorothy, her face livid and superior, “Don’t you think it’s strange, Miss Wayneright, that the right memories seem to emerge at just the right moment? Isn’t it convenient that there is always someone there to pull the strings in the right direction?

“Who constructed me? Why was I made?” she taunted. “What does it matter when our only purpose in existing is to show the leading actors the way out the stage door?

“At least I know the emptiness of my existence. You, R. Dorothy, are the biggest fool of all. The mermaid who thinks she’ll find a soul, when her only purpose is to be a key in the hands of others.” She stomped forward into the darkness of the Wayneright manor, the robot following behind, and shoved open a large, steel door. In the darkness, something was waiting, and Dorothy could feel it reaching out for her

“Here is another lock that is waiting to be opened,” Lisa said venomously, “All that is lacking is the key.”

Dorothy began feel afraid, for the thing that was waiting inside the darkened room was reaching for something inside of her, and pulling it out violently. She tried to scream, but all that came from her mouth was a mindless babble.

She felt her circuits flickering between light and darkness, and began to fear that she might shut down from the stress of the drain. If Roger had been there, she was sure she could have found the strength to endure it. If Roger had been there, the two glowing lights that were the things eyes would not have turned on in the shadows. If Roger had been there she could have held out. But he wasn’t, and everything went dark.
Jane 03-24-2004 12:58 AM
***

Roger opened the rotted door inside Paradigm Headquarters and peered into the dimnessthe dimness. At the far end of the room he saw the faint glimmer of an ember and the soft curl of smoke. He made his way to the end of the room where a lipstick-stained cigarette butt lay dying on a table.

“Angel.” He spoke her name aloud.

“Yes Roger?” He whirled around, startled, searching in the direction of the sound. After a moment, he spotted her.

She was huddled in the darkest corner of the room, her knees held tightly against her chest and her head bent downwards. Roger walked over to her and lifted her chin in his hands. Her hair was loose and fell limply against her face. Roger brushed it back and looked into her eyes. She had been crying, her mascara making visible streaks on her cheeks.

She shook her head away and turned towards the wall, pushing something towards him with her feet. It was a book. Roger picked it up and pulled a small flashlight from his coat.

He turned the light on, noticing as he did how Angel shrank away from it, pressing herself further into the darkness of the wall. It was an old book with a dark cover. The word “Metropolis” was emblazoned on the front. He moved the book closer to the light so he could examine the name of the author.

“You wrote this?” he asked.

“No,” Angel said quietly, her face still turned away from him, “It can’t be written. No matter how many times it’s begun there never is an ending. He’s always there to keep me from it, and now I have to stop him.”

She let out a muffled sob, and slowly turned her head back towards him and looked into his eyes. Roger was transfixed; her eyes were so beautiful. She turned and catlike began to crawl towards him, her eyes large and sad with the gleam of fresh tears at their borders. Roger opened his arms and let her crawl into them, feeling the warmth of her slim body against him and the faint scent of her perfume as she rested her head against his chest.

He looked down at her and stroked her hair. She smiled and lifted her hand towards his face, slowly caressing his cheek with her warm, soft fingers.

“Roger, I know it doesn’t matter anymore,” she whispered as her hand glided gently down his cheek and onto his neck, “but I want you to know that I love you.”

Slowly she ran her other hand up his chest, and then, with an impossible strength, she clutched his neck between her long, thin hands and began to squeeze. Roger gasped and tried to push her away, but she seemed possessed of an unthinkable power and he could not. He began to choke and sputter and, losing strength, he fell to the floor. She fell on top of him, her knees pressed into his chest, her beautiful, long white fingers still pressing the life from him. Behind her, he could see eight, long cables stretched out behind her like a skeletal pair of wings. They were the last things he saw before he blacked out.

Suddenly a column of blinding light surrounded them. Angel screamed and threw herself out of its path. Roger coughed and spasmed on the floor where she left him, fighting to breathe. He opened his eyes, blinking and squinting into the brilliance where, high above him, something was hovering.

***

Big Duo was not ready, but as soon as Ryon had finished attaching its skeletal foot and nervous system, the megadeus came to life. He jumped back, startled, but Seebach walked towards it, wearing an expression as if he were listening to something. Suddenly, the underground shook with a violent tremor, and Ryon had to grab onto the deus to keep his balance. Over the din of the clattering earthquake, he could hear Micheal speaking to him.

“There is a monster in the city, and we have to fight it,” he was saying, “This time, it is for the archangel. This time the battle is for Big Duo!”

He began to laugh in a tone so twisted and maniacal, that Ryon moved away from him, despite the difficulty caused by the tremor. Seebach seemed to have forgotten him in the rush towards the cockpit of his chariot. In a moment, the pair of them had blasted from the underground and out into the open sky.

To Be Continued…
Pygmalion 03-24-2004 06:56 AM
An interesting continuation. I looked up Cocytus and found that it was one of the five rivers of Hell, where the unburied wander for a century.

You have a real knack for ending on a cliffhanger. Therefore, more please.

Pygmalion
Tifaria 03-24-2004 06:58 AM
Whoa. I sincerely think this is the best chapter yet, Jane! I'm not very good at giving compliments for things I like beyond just saying, "I love this!" to everything, but I really mean it, I'm enjoying this story a lot. Smile )
Zola 03-24-2004 09:54 AM
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Originally posted by Jane
Oh, and, the prettiest paragraph in the story belongs to Zola and her masterful command of the written word. I'm in your debt dudette.


Your words and mood and tone, my dear. I just did a bit of rearranging and grammar police work. Wink

I like this series so much, you really capture that noir feeling.
Tony Waynewrong 03-24-2004 10:06 AM
Jane, you have a remarkable ability for story telling. I am delighted with what I 've read. Excellent work! I am looking forward to your next.

Kudos! Smile
NotAsleep 03-25-2004 12:52 AM
Another well-written segment of the story. Your different take on the cyclical nature of Paradigm keeps the characters true to themselves even as they change--the characters are developing in a very slow and plausible way. It's great to continue again. I have two questions for you this time:

1.: What does "Träger der Götter, zeigen mir die Wahrheit" mean? I don't exactly trust Altavista for much farther than I can throw a horse.

2.: Does this mean that you've gotten the lead on things you wanted? I'm definitely looking forward to reading this thing in full, and I was afraid you'd given up on it. I'm glad to see that's not the case at all. Thank you for keeping with it and putting so much work into it.
Jane 03-25-2004 01:33 PM
Well, I'm pretty sure that "Träger der Götter, zeigen mir die Wahrheit" means "Chariot of the Gods, show me the truth", but I'm not exactly a German-speaker. I'm trying to fake it. And, no, I hadn't given up on the story and I won't, thanks for waiting for me to get it up!

By the way, Cocytus is the last circle of hell in Dante's Inferno, where the damned spirits are frozen in ice. They cannot move, they cannot progress, they're stuck. Application? Well, that's up to the reader to figure out isn't it? Wink By the way, the next section is called "Story Board".
Kat 03-29-2004 06:46 PM
Argh. And I though Seebach was now past that Schwarzwald-esque craziness (referring to the laugh)..... ^___~

Your story(ies) just keeps getting better and better! ^_^
BabyGhia 01-13-2005 02:01 AM
I really like how this is turning out. Lisa seems like an interesting character. And the stuff with Angel... really great... that's the easiest way I can explain it.

Off to the next one.

BabyGhia